When a writer becomes noteworthy – either for their literary merit (like F. Scott Fitzgerald, Jane Austen, or Ernest Hemingway) or for their popularity (J.K. Rowling, Stephen King, or unfortunately Stephenie Meyer) – people often are curious about what the author’s early works were like. In the case of the former writers, this might involve a graduate student contacting various colleges and libraries and requesting special permission to peruse a set of letters written by the master when he or she was twenty years old, enjoying the night life in New York City or Paris while drinking heavily and staying up until 3 or 4 in the morning nearly every day. For the latter, it is more likely to be a superfan who is craving another fix while waiting for the author’s newest book to hit the shelves of Barnes and Noble (having devoured all the writer’s previous works and worn out the bindings on their favorites). Whatever the reason we choose to return to these early works, we do so largely out of a sense of curiosity. I had the great fortune of discovering one of my own early works not too long ago. While helping my dad clean up some of the clutter around his apartment, we discovered an old notebook that contained a story written by me in third grade, circa 1995. This story is so incredibly well told. The characters are captivating and deep. The prose is tight. The story grabs you from the first sentence and refuses to let you go. I am currently in the process of adapting it for the screen. To direct, I’m thinking … David Fincher, maybe. Although there are some horrific elements to it, so possibly I might be better off shopping it to Guillermo Del Toro. Hmm, I’ll have to give that some more thought.
All joking aside, this story is absolutely terrible. I know you aren’t supposed to preface the work with your own opinion but instead should allow the reader to come up with their own interpretation. But that won’t be necessary. It is terrible. I know it, you will soon know it, and I don’t really care. I have several stories saved on my computer that I am pretty proud of. And then there is this story, written in my fantastic third grade penmanship (here, I am only slightly exaggerating – really, my handwriting is the best aspect of this story). I share this mostly because I had meant to give it to my brother for Christmas and I forgot. So, hopefully he will find it in his Facebook feed and get a chuckle. I hope you will too! I know I did …
Presented in its entirety (uncut and with all spelling errors and errors in judgment intact) is:
The halloween Party
Once upon a time there was a class. it’s teacher was cool. One day the class was extra happy that night they would have a halloween party. Everyone was ecited excited. They were extra good that day. At 9:00 A.M. the teacher told the class that the halloween Party was at 8:00 P.M. At recess Ian, Ben, Nick, Chad, and Dan were all talking about it. At gym the class did their exircizes well. At 3:00 P.M. Ian told his mom he was excited. That night he was so excited that he waited by the door for an hour. But he was outside playing with his dog Max too. When he got there he was happy. It was really fun. And it was cool. Ian found his four friends. Ian had just got glasses a couple of a week ago. All of Ian’s best friends wore glasses. Now Ian wore glasses too. They had a great time. But a unexcpected visitor came. He was running. He said a skeleton was chasing him. nobody beleaved him, But they did once they saw the skeleton. He went on the stage and said “I have come to take someone to pay for what some people from the Vilige did to me one hundred years ago.” But did anyone from Fergus Falls do that to you? Asked Ian. No said the skeleton. Then he made the school fly! All the kids were scared. They all jumped on the stage and got the skeleton. They said that if the skeleton would put the school down the would give him some halloween candy. So the skeleton agreed and they got the school down, and the skeleton got some halloween candy. they were so happy. Now they still could have the party. The boys named Ian, Chad, Ben, Dan, and Nick were really having fun. They were having a great time. After the party they let the Kids stay awile and hang around. They let Kids do lots of stuff. Dan, Ben, Chad, Nick, and Ian were doing exersizes too build-up there muscles. They did push ups, Pull ups, sit ups, cherry pickers, burpes, and windmills. There teacher had his Apendex takin out. He had just gotten out of the hospital a couple of weeks ago. They were happy that he had gotten back o.k. They we The next day everyone knew that they would never forget that halloween. At school the kids felt good that they had got the skeleton away from the school. They were happy. The end.
There were some elements of this story that I found pretty amusing. They are, in no particular order:
- I know this story was written in third grade because I am in Fergus Falls for this Halloween party and this was the only year I didn’t go to school in Blackduck.
- My third grade teacher really did get his appendix out – I completely forgot that.
- I did have a few words and phrases struck out in the text. Was I maybe trying to hone my editing skills? If so, bravo for me. At least my heart was in the right place, huh?
- Once again, the penmanship in that notebook was pretty decent. The spelling on the other hand, not so much.
- I must have liked gym class more than I remember. Seriously, it gets singled out for no real reason early on, and then, once that nasty skeleton is appeased with our Halloween candy, we finally get to enjoy the party. And what do we do? Our exercises from gym. Dynamite. Which brings me to my last and favorite observation:
- I had forgotten about most of my third grade friends. And though I feel kind of bad admitting it, I have absolutely no idea who Dan and Nick are (I at least vaguely remember Chad and Ben). And if Ben Taylor, who is my best friend from Blackduck is reading this, don’t worry. You are not the Ben in this story and did not have to face the terrible skeleton alongside me. But, if you had been there, I imagine you would also have been happy that we saved the day and got to enjoy our fantastic Halloween party.
Thanks for reading!